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I woke up feeling the pain of wanting the unreachable; reality traversed my heart through the middle as if it were a harpoon, mercilessly rejoicing, as it saw my agony I ached with all my being desperate to be with you I closed my eyes tightly and longed to go back to my dreams, to the place where you were. Eventually I returned, but couldn't find you. Because even there, you’d left me behind.

Left behind

free verse · 2023 · shared 8h ago · 5 comments · 46 likes
free verse · 8h ago
5 comments · 46 likes
Distilled Melancholy
Distilled M.
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DawnS.M
DawnS.M 7h
See now You pierced my soul with your poem's harpoon too, we are even🥺 I love the last lines, it hit the hardest🤌🥲💜🫂🫂🫂
Distilled Melancholy
Distilled M. artist 3h
🫂🫂🫂🫂🫂🫂 I’d never let you wonder about my drafts or I’d be facing murder charges 😁🫂
DawnS.M
DawnS.M 3h
Now my melancholy self really wishes to see them🥲🥲👍
helz
helz 5h
That last line is deep! Love it!
Distilled Melancholy
Distilled M. artist 3h
Love that you loved it 🌻🖤