Quiero permanecer
suspendida
en la aurora boreal
que me otorgan tus ojos
cuando me miran
guardar en mi pecho
la ternura
que brotan de tus palabras
durante el día
Y nunca dejar de
escuchar tu voz
diciéndome las palabras
tan prohibidas
que sólo tu y yo sabemos
cuando cae el telón
al final del día
Suspendida
free verse · 2023 · shared 12 Sep · 7 comments · 25 likes
free verse · 12 Sep
7 comments · 25 likes
7 comments · 25 likes
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Hangell
12 Sep
Es hermoso amor. Me encanta. Te amo ❤❤
Gaby C.
artist 12 Sep
Hermoso tu mi amor. Te amo 💖
Binny T.
12 Sep
@Gaby C I wish I understood this poem . even though I cannot read it... just looking at the words gives me sense of hope and love and it likes give me a solution to all my problems... I dunno if that makes any sense... lol
Gaby C.
artist 12 Sep
I'm so glad you liked it! I wish poetry could save all the world's problems. I wrote it for the love of my life 🙂
𝓼𝓲𝔁 𝓹.
12 Sep
This is gorgeous! I can't speak spanish well enough to leave a comment in spanish. I'm not sure how well you read english, either. but I can generally read it well enough. that image of the northern light eyes is just stunning. really beautiful!
Gaby C.
artist 12 Sep
thank you so much @𝓼𝓲𝔁 𝓹𝓶ꨄ︎ I can read in English without trouble. I really appreciate the kind comment 🙂
𝓼𝓲𝔁 𝓹.
12 Sep
Good to know!