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I look apon a broken house, shards of glass strewn each a fragment of captured torment in a aged structure. Falling apart a shell once fruitfull untamed by lifes demented claws of bleak erosion, as time pays a heavy toll on the fabric devoid of emotion as all the love is gone tarnishing alone it crumbles evermore. Many a great story was told there love being found, generations grown aswell, hope filled it's sheltering bricks and mortar arm Alas Now the shards litter a broken husk forgotten and left to rot, as no one cares a thought to whats left behind amongst strewn silic a.s...

Shards

free verse · 2023 · shared 10 Sep · 16 comments · 48 likes
free verse · 10 Sep
16 comments · 48 likes
James Mitchell
James M.
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Düje Dödt
Düje D. 10 Sep
Wonderful 👌 I love a good derelict... the imagination runs riot
James Mitchell
James M. artist 10 Sep
cheers mate, love that my inked bleakness, triggered a flow of imagination 👌👀
Impressed muse
Impressed m. 10 Sep
I love your lush descriptions, and I could see it really clear, such mighty tools you possess, those bleakness is highly appreciated 🫶❣️ so amazing, I loved this slowly darkening read (some new words) bookmarked !!!
James Mitchell
James M. artist 10 Sep
thanks bud I'm so chuffed you bookmarked my inked ruin ✨️👀 sending you a virtual kiss bud 😘
Impressed muse
Impressed m. 10 Sep
always 😇
dandelion__diaries
🌬..•*🌼 what a treat James!! Each word was so intense and fit so perfectly. Emotions pulled at from all angles! Wonderful work!! 🤍🔖😍👏🏼🔥
James Mitchell
James M. artist 10 Sep
woah the precious dandelion greets my work cheers i love that you enjoyed this inked ruin 👀👌
dandelion__diaries
🤭🤗
~Steven
~Steven 10 Sep
A descriptive delight…well written, my friend! ✍🏼✨✨
James Mitchell
James M. artist 10 Sep
thanks Steven the great 👀👍
~Steven
~Steven 10 Sep
No U! 🙌
PJ Quill 🪶🪶🪶
PJ 🪶. 10 Sep
well this is incredible. not sure why you have not been coming up on my feed. but I unfolliwed and followed you again hopefully it triggers the algorithm. if not I'll stay on top of it. I have a lot of catching up to do😇❤️💯🙏
James Mitchell
James M. artist 10 Sep
it's because you have only recently liked my works so the system needs refreshing in time. I'm certain that my poems should come up on your feed page
ɪnˈskrʌɪb_sØul
Wow so beautifully put together, almost like the words are carved into one another, a epic empotional and touching piece 💙
James Mitchell
James M. artist 10 Sep
your comments is the one really needed thanks 🤗
ɪnˈskrʌɪb_sØul
Aww that's really kind of you 🤗, and i meant *emotional smh lol