I look apon a broken house, shards of glass strewn each a fragment of captured torment in a aged structure.
Falling apart a shell once fruitfull untamed by lifes demented claws of bleak erosion, as time pays a heavy toll on the fabric devoid of emotion as all the love is gone tarnishing alone it crumbles evermore.
Many a great story was told there love being found, generations grown aswell, hope filled it's sheltering bricks and mortar arm
Alas Now the shards litter a broken husk forgotten and left to rot, as no one cares a thought to whats left behind amongst strewn silic
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Shards
free verse · 2023 · shared 10 Sep · 16 comments · 48 likes
free verse · 10 Sep
16 comments · 48 likes
16 comments · 48 likes
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Düje D.
10 Sep
Wonderful 👌 I love a good derelict... the imagination runs riot
James M.
artist 10 Sep
cheers mate, love that my inked bleakness, triggered a flow of imagination 👌👀
Impressed m.
10 Sep
I love your lush descriptions, and I could see it really clear, such mighty tools you possess, those bleakness is highly appreciated 🫶❣️ so amazing, I loved this slowly darkening read
(some new words)
bookmarked !!!
James M.
artist 10 Sep
thanks bud I'm so chuffed you bookmarked my inked ruin ✨️👀
sending you a virtual kiss bud 😘
Impressed m.
10 Sep
always 😇
dandelion__diaries
10 Sep
🌬..•*🌼 what a treat James!! Each word was so intense and fit so perfectly. Emotions pulled at from all angles! Wonderful work!! 🤍🔖😍👏🏼🔥
James M.
artist 10 Sep
woah the precious dandelion greets my work cheers i love that you enjoyed this inked ruin 👀👌
dandelion__diaries
10 Sep
🤭🤗
~Steven
10 Sep
A descriptive delight…well written, my friend! ✍🏼✨✨
James M.
artist 10 Sep
thanks Steven the great 👀👍
~Steven
10 Sep
No U! 🙌
PJ 🪶.
10 Sep
well this is incredible. not sure why you have not been coming up on my feed. but I unfolliwed and followed you again hopefully it triggers the algorithm. if not I'll stay on top of it. I have a lot of catching up to do😇❤️💯🙏
James M.
artist 10 Sep
it's because you have only recently liked my works so the system needs refreshing in time. I'm certain that my poems should come up on your feed page
ɪnˈskrʌɪb_sØul
10 Sep
Wow so beautifully put together, almost like the words are carved into one another, a epic empotional and touching piece 💙
James M.
artist 10 Sep
your comments is the one really needed thanks 🤗
ɪnˈskrʌɪb_sØul
10 Sep
Aww that's really kind of you 🤗, and i meant *emotional smh lol