Patience is worn thin,
By means of instant gratification.
Values are diminished,
Right on down
To dollars and cents.
After a lifelong assault
On the mind
And the senses -
Hatred is the consensus.
Hatred leads to violence,
Violence leads to
The acceptance of violence,
Violence leads to fear,
And the need for surveillance.
Fear relinquishes control
Out of a desire for protection.
The protector
Becomes the oppressor.
Human Conditioning
free verse · 2023 · shared 11h ago · 18 comments · 33 likes
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Swirling P.
10h
Wow that's completely right. One system after the next and it all goes round and round. Sounds very sociological actually. I like your poem. I will may see me do a sociological poem one day.
Louise S.
artist 8h
aww thanks and that's awesome, can't wait to read it. just me thinking about all the shit I can't change 😅 it's all inherent to us, apparently.
Swirling P.
7h
It could well be, or maybe we are agressive violent animals like chimps, lol strangely but then we do have moments, if you kill all the poets, it will definately be inherent lol Thanks for your kind words
Wolf-in-a-Hoodie
9h
Obviously love this. 🤣🙌🖤🐺
Louise S.
artist 8h
TY!! 💓👀
M'Tæka
9h
This is such a dominant portion of my own existential dread and misanthropy, and I hate it. But I love this!
Louise S.
artist 7h
lmao, same, and thank you !! ❤️🙏
Je’an
7h
Brilliantly written
Louise S.
artist 7h
many thanks friend ❤️🙏
~Steven
7h
Wisdom! ✍🏼✨✨
Louise S.
artist 6h
thank you Steven 😊💜
Frank S.
6h
love it! followed
Louise S.
artist 4h
thanks so much 💓