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The board indicates a sign Don't pluck or simply pay the fine. Nursery, the peaceful oasis! Blossoms of pink and white, Dahlia and Roses are bright. The fiery orange &yellow Marigold Prime. With green leafy shades of lace, The great link to grace! Love doesn't require 'see and acquire'. It admires the sense of hint Invisible, The conversation with whole Incredible. Heeling to get by look at, The waving leaves fresh set. And the shade to sit in, The pleasant cool startling sense! No care of clock or time, Who tends, it's three or nine? Affection for this exquisite, The brilliant blooming bright! Each heart enlightens by The blooming sight! SURU...😊

THE BLOOMING SIGHT

free verse Β· 2023 Β· shared 2 weeks ago Β· 16 comments Β· 45 likes
free verse Β· 2 weeks ago
16 comments Β· 45 likes
Suru...😊
Suru...😊
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HΓ­da
HΓ­da 2 weeks ago
I really liked your 1 stanza,as it seems all those flowers are kept next to me ! πŸ’
Suru...😊
Suru...😊 artist 2 weeks ago
Thank you so much Hida.... I m glad that my readers r sensing the verse and feel of my write.... Thanks for the feedback It mean a lot to me 🌼🌼🌼😊
HΓ­da
HΓ­da 2 weeks ago
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avani bhushan
avani b. 2 weeks ago
hey suru, your writing always amazes me. it's always beautiful to read. I just read one stanza and I liked it ! this is how your poem is. beautifully written. 🌻
Suru...😊
Suru...😊 artist 2 weeks ago
Aww, I m just flying by reading your comment on my write...dear you don't know how much my heart is fumbling... getting the happiness.... 🌼🌼🌼😊✨✨✨ Thank you so much AVANI...πŸ’“πŸ’“
X.Marsvil_poetry
X.Marsvil_poetry 2 weeks ago
Awesome... feels like chillin in a flowery garden on a spring day. Beautiful scenery and deep meaning ❀️
Suru...😊
Suru...😊 artist 2 weeks ago
This is the words when I felt it while writing the portion.....and yah the meaning behind is as deep merely some can leap into... Thank you so much Marsvil 🌼🌼✨✨
gauravnirbheek
gauravnirbheek 2 weeks ago
love it ❀️
gauravnirbheek
gauravnirbheek 2 weeks ago
I give you ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Suru...😊
Suru...😊 artist 2 weeks ago
It's 6...increased..thanks gaurav !
gauravnirbheek
gauravnirbheek 2 weeks ago
Even 6 is less for you.
Suru...😊
Suru...😊 artist 2 weeks ago
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Michael Blackmore
Michael B. 2 weeks ago
Lovely piece πŸ‘Œ
Suru...😊
Suru...😊 artist 2 weeks ago
Literally I to love this miracle, Even I don't know how have I created this...random imagination of mine...haha Thanks for the read!πŸ™πŸ˜ŠπŸŒΌπŸŒΌ
Michael Blackmore
Michael B. 2 weeks ago
You're welcome πŸ™‚ All we can do is thank our imaginations for we'll never understand them πŸ€·β€β™‚οΈ
Suru...😊
Suru...😊 artist 2 weeks ago
The magic sight of our soul! Incredibly exclusive and whole! Yess that's absolute! πŸ”₯πŸ”₯😊