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The board indicates a sign Don't pluck or simply pay the fine. Nursery, the peaceful oasis! Blossoms of pink and white, Dahlia and Roses are bright. The fiery orange &yellow Marigold Prime. With green leafy shades of lace, The great link to grace! Love doesn't require 'see and acquire'. It admires the sense of hint Invisible, The conversation with whole Incredible. Heeling to get by look at, The waving leaves fresh set. And the shade to sit in, The pleasant cool startling sense! No care of clock or time, Who tends, it's three or nine? Affection for this exquisite, The brilliant blooming bright! Each heart enlightens by The blooming sight! SURU...😊

THE BLOOMING SIGHT

free verse Β· 2023 Β· shared 13 Sep Β· 16 comments Β· 45 likes
free verse Β· 13 Sep
16 comments Β· 45 likes
Suru...😊
Suru...😊
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HΓ­da
HΓ­da 13 Sep
I really liked your 1 stanza,as it seems all those flowers are kept next to me ! πŸ’
Suru...😊
Suru...😊 artist 13 Sep
Thank you so much Hida.... I m glad that my readers r sensing the verse and feel of my write.... Thanks for the feedback It mean a lot to me 🌼🌼🌼😊
HΓ­da
HΓ­da 13 Sep
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avani bhushan
avani b. 13 Sep
hey suru, your writing always amazes me. it's always beautiful to read. I just read one stanza and I liked it ! this is how your poem is. beautifully written. 🌻
Suru...😊
Suru...😊 artist 13 Sep
Aww, I m just flying by reading your comment on my write...dear you don't know how much my heart is fumbling... getting the happiness.... 🌼🌼🌼😊✨✨✨ Thank you so much AVANI...πŸ’“πŸ’“
X.Marsvil_poetry
Awesome... feels like chillin in a flowery garden on a spring day. Beautiful scenery and deep meaning ❀️
Suru...😊
Suru...😊 artist 13 Sep
This is the words when I felt it while writing the portion.....and yah the meaning behind is as deep merely some can leap into... Thank you so much Marsvil 🌼🌼✨✨
gauravnirbheek
love it ❀️
gauravnirbheek
I give you ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Suru...😊
Suru...😊 artist 13 Sep
It's 6...increased..thanks gaurav !
gauravnirbheek
Even 6 is less for you.
Suru...😊
Suru...😊 artist 13 Sep
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Michael Blackmore
Michael B. 13 Sep
Lovely piece πŸ‘Œ
Suru...😊
Suru...😊 artist 13 Sep
Literally I to love this miracle, Even I don't know how have I created this...random imagination of mine...haha Thanks for the read!πŸ™πŸ˜ŠπŸŒΌπŸŒΌ
Michael Blackmore
Michael B. 13 Sep
You're welcome πŸ™‚ All we can do is thank our imaginations for we'll never understand them πŸ€·β€β™‚οΈ
Suru...😊
Suru...😊 artist 13 Sep
The magic sight of our soul! Incredibly exclusive and whole! Yess that's absolute! πŸ”₯πŸ”₯😊