The board indicates a sign
Don't pluck or simply pay the fine.
Nursery, the peaceful oasis!
Blossoms of pink and white,
Dahlia and Roses are bright.
The fiery orange &yellow
Marigold Prime.
With green leafy shades of lace,
The great link to grace!
Love doesn't require 'see and acquire'.
It admires the sense of hint Invisible,
The conversation with whole Incredible.
Heeling to get by look at,
The waving leaves fresh set.
And the shade to sit in,
The pleasant cool startling sense!
No care of clock or time,
Who tends, it's three or nine?
Affection for this exquisite,
The brilliant blooming bright!
Each heart enlightens by
The blooming sight!
SURU...π
THE BLOOMING SIGHT
free verse Β· 2023 Β· shared 13 Sep Β· 16 comments Β· 45 likes
free verse Β· 13 Sep
16 comments Β· 45 likes
16 comments Β· 45 likes
16 comments
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HΓda
13 Sep
I really liked your 1 stanza,as it seems all those flowers are kept next to me ! π
Suru...π
artist 13 Sep
Thank you so much Hida....
I m glad that my readers r sensing the verse and feel of my write....
Thanks for the feedback
It mean a lot to me πΌπΌπΌπ
HΓda
13 Sep
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avani b.
13 Sep
hey suru, your writing always amazes me. it's always beautiful to read. I just read one stanza and I liked it ! this is how your poem is. beautifully written. π»
Suru...π
artist 13 Sep
Aww, I m just flying by reading your comment on my write...dear you don't know how much my heart is fumbling... getting the happiness....
πΌπΌπΌπβ¨β¨β¨
Thank you so much AVANI...ππ
X.Marsvil_poetry
13 Sep
Awesome... feels like chillin in a flowery garden on a spring day. Beautiful scenery and deep meaning β€οΈ
Suru...π
artist 13 Sep
This is the words when I felt it while writing the portion.....and yah the meaning behind is as deep merely some can leap into...
Thank you so much Marsvil
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gauravnirbheek
13 Sep
love it β€οΈ
gauravnirbheek
13 Sep
I give you ββββββ
Suru...π
artist 13 Sep
It's 6...increased..thanks gaurav !
gauravnirbheek
13 Sep
Even 6 is less for you.
Suru...π
artist 13 Sep
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Michael B.
13 Sep
Lovely piece π
Suru...π
artist 13 Sep
Literally I to love this miracle,
Even I don't know how have I created this...random imagination of mine...haha
Thanks for the read!πππΌπΌ
Michael B.
13 Sep
You're welcome π All we can do is thank our imaginations for we'll never understand them π€·ββοΈ
Suru...π
artist 13 Sep
The magic sight of our soul!
Incredibly exclusive and whole!
Yess that's absolute!
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