Collaboration
HIDA ΓSURU...π
Clueless, I'm unwell in my mind,
A tangled mess I can't unwind.
The weight of sadness pebbled in,
Heavy and deep!
A constant struggle that swipes the sleep.
As I attain the horror to see,
That truly gets the reflection of me.
With anxiety and self-doubt,
I can't rise above the darkness now!
Suffering the Suffocation hue,
Simply it's not so few.
The Psyche Submerged Deep within,
Half a Glass of Water in.
Senses out of Sense to Senses,
The situation favors dark and fences.
Outside like a wonder fit so Well,
Inside the shade of blue unfit, Unwell.
Boost of decline levels the meter high,
Either to end it whole or make the spirit alive.
Cyclone of right or wrong survival battles in,
Who can help for the Disaster of men,
Unwell within?
No med,meditation, medication can supervise,
The Fiery happiness weld no worth price.
Cause out of a Cause to Cause,
The situation Hurts and Cuts that Shut.
Itself of course for the free fair loss so well,
Just break the rock or open the lock of unwell.
Think Positive, Fight the Fear, Be well,
It's Delusion of Despair, Precisely UNWELL.
UNWELL
free verse Β· 2023 Β· shared 15h ago Β· 6 comments Β· 35 likes
free verse Β· 15h ago
6 comments Β· 35 likes
6 comments Β· 35 likes
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14h
Thank you! Congratulations on expressing your emotions and struggles so beautifully through words. Your ability to convey the depth of your feelings is truly inspiring. Keep writing, keep expressing, and remember that there is always support and hope available. Congratulations on your talent!π
Suru...π
artist 14h
Thank you so much samir.....your entirely true that there is always support and hope available....without Hida's creative write it wouldn't be possible to make it an inspiring authentic write....thankyou so much for reading....ππΌπΌπ
sensitive^writer
14h
hurts and cuts that shut
are unwell to the black heart
so deep broken on edge
the pieces of glass crystal clear into the waves of skin, each layer filled with nothing but deep sorrows, memories reminds you of very cut sparkling into your skin so unwell messier along the darkness of twinkling sadistic life.
Suru...π
artist 14h
So beautiful expressions of yours. ... Thank you so much for reading πΌπΌπΌπ
Pappo
14h
Very well-crafted, collaborative poetry
Suru...π
artist 14h
Thank you so much pappo for the compliment....πΌπΌπit my first collaboration....and with hida